szaleniec1000 Aug 08, 2014 02:22
show don't tell, the pansexual '50s, ron is ooc, draco is ooc, pov!fail, welsh railway, are you a witch or not, retcon yay, damning with faint praise, hermione in name only, out of order, breast fixation, epic fail, please recycle where facilities exist, department of redundancy department, too much information, badfic:hogwarts overexposed, salazar is evil, completely nonsexual, i can has characterisation, sexism, how is babby formed, nudity for everyone, trelawney is ooc, harry potter, golden water, dialogue is not narration, exact eavesdropping, continuity isn't optional, education system from hell, approved hogwarts exposed dialogue voice, aoc does not work that way